Advise customer on separating security and business entities

[MarkvanMents]

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[MarkvanMents]

Thanks for the review @knorrie
I've responded to most of the comments in e6dcf89.

[MarkvanMents]

Thanks for your comments, @rvhofwegen. I have made some suggestions to address them, let me know if the suggestions improve things and answer you concerns.

Mark.

[MarkvanMents]

@rvhofwegen and @knorrie
Are you OK with my proposed changes?
I'd like to publish this soon, we can always add and change things if we have more thoughts.
Can you confirm by c.o.b. tomorrow (15/9)? If I don't hear from you, I'll publish anyhow and we can pick up changes later.
I think better to get this out there now, rather than wait for it to be perfect?
Mark

[rvhofwegen]

@rvhofwegen and @knorrie Are you OK with my proposed changes? I'd like to publish this soon, we can always add and change things if we have more thoughts. Can you confirm by c.o.b. tomorrow (15/9)? If I don't hear from you, I'll publish anyhow and we can pick up changes later. I think better to get this out there now, rather than wait for it to be perfect? Mark

I saw 3 open discussions and suggestion from my side. before publishing these need to be addressed

[MarkvanMents]

@rvhofwegen and @knorrie Are you OK with my proposed changes? I'd like to publish this soon, we can always add and change things if we have more thoughts. Can you confirm by c.o.b. tomorrow (15/9)? If I don't hear from you, I'll publish anyhow and we can pick up changes later. I think better to get this out there now, rather than wait for it to be perfect? Mark

I saw 3 open discussions and suggestion from my side. before publishing these need to be addressed

Hi Rene,
I've made suggestions for text changes to address your concerns. Are these all good - in which case I can commit them, or do they miss your concerns?

I don't think there are any outstanding concerns where I haven't suggested a change.